Monday, October 6, 2008

Monday Critique

For wind chime

leaves falling is more random than dancing, instead of it being choreographed
image of leaves falling is heavier than the wind chime sound

For hair dryer

the idea of the insects was strongest, sound seems to overwhelm something

For slot machine

best for typeface, a growing, ticking noise, maybe the typeface can grow and bounce off one another, the sound is hurried/crowded, put the letters in as if it's a busy place

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